Mrs D

Some of your ideas are effective. However, I would like to see more visual links to the lyrics and the tone of the music - there is a moment towards the end where you have used a two shot and the tone of the music changes considerably - you need to reflect this in terms of a shot transition or change of pace. Have a look at some other storyboards for help and go back to RMAs and count how many shots they have and how you can use repetition effectively. Needs more technical transitions to get into the higher bands. You have excellent knowledge of moving image and use of camera etc - use it.