Mrs D

This is a good draft Drew. You have some effective transitions at times and the use of the 'past' section works well. However, it is a little repetitive at times - don't forget about the repeatability factor. Also some of your transitions aren't at the best times - at about a minute in the tone changes, yet you don't change the shot. You also need to be more creative with your use of images in your digipak. They are too similar. Keep up the good work and check level 3 and 4 criteria carefully.