Music video second draft

What to do for third draft
After taking in feedback from my focus group i have realised that some parts are repetetive, and towards the end of the video where it should be a climax there are repeated shots that dont represent the tempo change of the song. Also in certain parts the lipsinging doesnt match the song and it doesnt look professional so im going to re-film theese. On my third day of filming im going to film some footage of some of the begining verses as im not happy with the way the lips match the song, and im going to film some end couruses so match the climax of the song.